Smoke
Wooden smell
Warms my hands
Memories of my childhood
Comforting
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Smoke
Stinking, smothering
Stings my eyes
Memories of my ex
Unpleasant
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Smoke
Burning inferno
Habitats being destroyed
Firemen to the rescue
Despair
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Smoke
Smoldering heat
Surrounds my heart
Lost in your eyes
Lust
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I kept checking my email and never received today's prompt (almost a third of the way through!) for OctPoWriMo.
Then I went on the site and saw a prompt for Smoke, with a possible palyndrome form.
I won't have time to try my hand at a palyndrome. But here are 4 elevenies about various notions, both pleasant and less so, that came to mind about smoke.
Evocative - I like how each stanza gives a different perspective and that you finish on lust.
ReplyDeleteThank you. It may sound strange, but rediscovering lust is a big part of my journey towards recovery. Of course I had to finish with it ;)
DeleteVery nice :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!
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