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Sunday, March 18, 2012

Lost


Feeling constricted
Where’s the door
Running isn’t the answer
Feet on floor
Opening to compassion
Heart feels sore
I hear the tapping
Life’s a chore
Running isn’t an option
I found the door



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14 comments:

  1. well done beginning to end. Glad you found the door.

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    1. I appreciate your words, thank you for stopping by.

      Peace,
      Morgan

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  2. Wow, I really enjoyed this poem. So much conveyed in 33 words. I liked the rhythm and rhyme. Very nicely written!

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    1. I am taking your words in, I greatly appreciate them. Thank you very much.

      Peace,
      Morgan

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    1. Very sweet of you to agree. Thank you so much for stopping by.

      Peace,
      Morgan

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  4. Thanks for linking up to Trifextra this weekend. I agree, too. Your poem has a nice rhythm to it. Running isn't an option--I like that. Hope to see you back on Monday.

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    1. Thank you very much, love your contests!

      Peace,
      Morgan

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  5. Just a guess, but I think that running happened whether it was an option or not :)

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    1. Actually didn't, I have hung up my running shoes.

      Always wonderful to see you, thank you for stopping by.

      Peace,
      Morgan

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  6. Once you find the door, there's no need to run. You find the door and you can walk out at your leisure.

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  7. That pretty much was the point. Thanks for getting it.

    Peace,
    Morgan

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  8. Erin always get the point :) Good work Morgan. I found my door, but I must admit to walking hastily on accession :)

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    1. Hey Shah, just saw that I hadn't replied to this one. Thanks so much for your supportive words.

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