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My Poem: Beauty Denied
Flower raised
Light in her eyes
Smiling face
Opening to Love
Shot rang true
Slow to fall
Last breath expressed
Beauty denied
Blood trail out
Floating Flower
Eyes looking up
Gone the light
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I combined two challenges; The Picture from Words in Sync and the word Trail from Trifecta inspired me.
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| A Trifecta Challenge |
Your beauty is not denied, it is bountiful and it is everywhere, especially in the above post...Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, I appreciate it!
DeletePeace,
Morgan
Sad and lovely and haunting.
ReplyDeleteThank you... I am taking in your words.
DeletePeace,
Morgan
Thanks for this lovely poem Morgan - truly beautiful and wow - you've not done poetry for so long? X
ReplyDeleteI used to do it a lot when I was younger but I guess I lost interest. I never thought I was any good at it. You re-sparked my interest in it. I did get some advice from my daughter on the flow of it. She explained the different kinds of poetry and told me that it didn't have flow so I changed it. I didn't like rules in school so I didn't pay much attention to the structure of poetry.
DeleteThanks for re-igniting one of my earlier passions.
Peace,
Morgan
So tragic and painful.
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you felt what I was trying to convey. Thank you for stopping by.
DeletePeace,
Morgan
Thanks for linking up to Trifecta. This is a really powerful piece. I love the structure of it--the buildup and the fall. Very nicely done. Hope to see you back again soon.
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