Two days ago to m' Love I said
"When do you come and visit me?
I'd love to have you in my bed,
Even more if you'd sleep with me."
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He's coming to see me, you hear?
Hooray, hooray
And he'll even sleep the night here
Hooray, hooray!
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His reply came quick as an arrow
"I am not free tonight, he said,
But I can come by tomorrow
And I'll spend the night in your bed"
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He's coming to see me, you hear?
Hooray, hooray
And he'll even sleep the night here
Hooray, hooray!
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He even added right away
"Or the night after, you decide
I'm free for you on either day
By your preference I shall abide."
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He's coming to see me, you hear?
Hooray, hooray
And he'll even sleep the night here
Hooray, hooray!
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So let me go and get ready
My Love to welcome in my bed
The news he's staying makes me heady
I'm so glad for my desre I pled!
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He's coming to see me, you hear?
Hooray, hooray
And he'll even sleep the night here
Hooray, hooray!
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Ok, I'm sort of getting late to go fetch him, so please forgive me for the quick postface.
Otherwise, OctPoWriMo day 17 was just not going to happen today!
This amused me greatly - lovely verse. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad it did!
DeleteThe hooray words kept bubbling in me all day long, they had to come out! 😊
Very Seussian! So happy he's coming to see you!
ReplyDeleteThat's how I explained it to him (my Lover, not Dr Seuss obviously!): the idea of the prompt was a childlike, gay poem.
DeleteI didn't have time to worry about the number of words, but I think I managed to catch the bubbling energy that kept me running all day 😊
Thank you for feeling it too!
(And you can't imagine how happy I was about that part! It's the first time I've dared ask him to sleep here, and he said yes!)